The book has a promising start: two coworkers, both widowers, end up bonding over fishing. The two hit various fishing spots until Dan suggests Dutchman's Creek. Abe has never heard of it, but he's game, so the two set off. At Herman's Diner, a local eatery, the two ask about the fishing spot and are warned away from it, so right there the stage is set for some spooky happenings, and you want the two to hurry up and get there so things can start happening. All this happens in the first 50 pages or so, then you have to wait until page 197 before they finally get there. So what happens for 150 pages? Howard, of Herman's Diner (either his name should have been Herman, or the diner should have been called Howard's Diner), recounts the history of Dutchman's Creek, which, in and of itself, wouldn't be so bad, if it felt as through the reader were immersed in the events as they occurred, but they don't. It comes across as exactly what it is, someone sitting in a room while someone drones on and on and on. It isn't until we come back to present day that the reader once again feels involved with the events as they play out.
For me, this recounting often feels unfinished, as if they author was building up to something, didn't know what that something was going to be and meant to go back to it, and never did. This is often at points where dialogue should be used, but instead the author basically says it's not important what was said, but it feels like the character is about to reveal something, then changes their mind. Quite often I was left feeling frustrated because I'm thinking it's about to get good, but then the author glosses right over it and you never get the full impact. We find out later that Dan learned of the location through his grandfather's fishing journal, and knowing that, this history could have been spaced throughout as Abe discovers the journal and starts reading through it. As a result, what could have been a great cosmic horror novel gets lost in the ramblings of an old man. Not recommended. 2/5 stars.